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Seventeen Forever..


This is my first proper post on here.

well, i really love writing fics, i have like about 7 books under my bed that i've written so i thought i might try one out on here to see if anyone likes it/ reads it. this will have something to do with hannah montana but not mainly focusing on it.
okay, so this is Seventeen Forever & here goes nothing...

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intro

this was it, my life was now officially falling apart, my mum and dad have had enough of england and now they are shipping us all off to america, LA to be precise. “it will be a fresh start” mum had said. “you’ll make tones of new friends” dad had added. I just nodded and went back to packing up my room, I took in the view of the rolling fields, the pool, the horses and every other perfect detail from my window. i sighed. Two days from now I’ll be in a brand new place, a brand new house, a brand new start.. great!


what do you all think?
comments make me smileee :D

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-- Edited by char' ;) at 21:48, 2009-03-09

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i like it ... wow , 7 books ... you must be talented for that ! ... continue ...

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thank you.
i shall get writing tonight and add more tomorrow so check back :)
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Chapter 1.

“so kids, what do you think!?” my dad asked throwing his hands in the air and gleaming at the house. I stepped beside my older sister lauren and smiled. “wow” she whispered to me. My younger brother Charlie was jumping up and down with excitement, he was 12 with the mental age of a 4 year old I swear. I had to give my parents something, the house was amazing, and big. I followed my family up the stairs into the already furnished house, I had a quick look around the downstairs before attempting to find my bedroom. I almost fainted as I took in the new view from my bedroom window, the sun was setting slowly behind the ocean and the waves lapped gently against the shore.
It’s been a week since we moved to LA and I still need to get used to waking up in bright sunlight. I turned over and slid open my phone “9:30. Nice” I whispered to myself before swinging my legs out of the bed. I took a quick glimpse out of my window “perfect” I smiled changing into a skirt and top and heading out. The walk down to the beach took about 2 minutes, I took my flip flops off and swung them gently in my hand as I walked down the beach, it was so peaceful until I reached a group of guys playing with a football. One minute I was admiring the view, the next minute I was clutching the side of my face “ouch!?” I winced. I heard laughing from the group so I turned on my heels and walked off.  I sat down on the sand and began to compose a text to Lauren. “urm, hi, I’m sorry about before it was an accident and totally my fault” I looked up to see where the babbling was coming from, I was frozen, he was gorgeous. His black hair framed his face perfectly and his smile melted my insides. “it’s ok. I’m ok” I attempted to smile back. He took a seat in the sand next to me. “I haven’t seen you around here before?” he almost questioned, “I’m new” I replied playing with the sand in my hands. “just moved here a week ago actually into the house on top of the hill” I said gesturing towards my house, he followed my gaze. “nice, you starting school in September?” he asked. Of course it was summer here at the moment so there was no school for a few weeks. “yeah, some school that’s down the street.. Harlow or something” I answered. “that’s cool, I go there, so I guess we skipped the basics totally there, I’m mitchel by the way” he said holding his hand out. “I would tell you my name but I think I might be suffering from concussion” I replied jokingly taking his hand in my own “I’m char. Well charlotte, but I prefer char” I smiled back shaking his hand lightly. He dropped my hand and stood up “You know, we should hang out sometime” he said with one last flash of those perfect teeth.



it will get better. honest :)

 



-- Edited by char' ;) at 21:29, 2009-03-11

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OMG,
keep goin or have u abandoned the story???

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OMG this is so Fantastic!! dont have abandoned the story i wanna know whats happened!

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