This is a song I wrote. Comments, suggestions are acceptable, and appreciated.
Song Title:: Don't Come Back
La, La, La, La, La, La
La, De,Da, Da, Yeah,
Everything around me Seems to fall in its place You show up and make a big mess I don't want you here!
You break us apart And then you say you're feelings But i'm not listening My heart is breaking And you're saying Just forget about him Be mine Just be mine And as soon as I find out That it was all your fault I say go Just go And Don't come back again 'Cause you're not my one
Haven't you ever felt like cold as ice Ripped in half And no one can hear you cry Yeah. No one can hear you cry I wonder what he's doing I wonder what he's thinking If he's thinking of me The way I'm thinking of him Oh... I don't care what you say If I'm beautiful Well I don't care He's the only one for me
You break us apart And then you say you're feelings But i'm not listening My heart is breaking And you're saying Just forget about him Be mine Just be mine And as soon as I find out That it was all your fault I say go Just go And Don't come back again 'Cause you're not my one My one.. 'Cause you're not my one
-Guitar strums and then goes into a guitar solo-
Just Go! Oh, OH! Just Go! Don't come back. Please Don't Come back 'Cause I just want him. Oh, Oh.
Don't come back..
Everything you've done You realize that it's wrong You try to fix what you've done And now he's mine I am his And I thank you for that.. Thank you for that..
I liked it too! And I've always wondered how I can write awesome stories and awesome poems, but I can't write songs! So I can't give suggestions either. =)
